An Apology

He set me in your cocoon like arms
Your eyes swept into my heart
Your tender gaze spoke to me,
It said I was yours,
You kept me close to your bosom,
I was your earth,
You became my moon,
I was a morsel of sand
You made a castle out of me
The scorching sun was out always,
The sand was vehemently hot,
The flecks and molds blistered your palms,
I beat the walls down myself,
The sand splattered on you,
Your blisters burnt scathingly this time,
Your cocoon was still awaiting my return,
But I had left in search of nectar,
I knew not, you thought, of the poisonous nectar,
I frothed at my mouth, the poison had trickled past my immune veins,
I dialysed myself with little success,

I thought you knew not
But I found out, you had been trying to re sculpt the castle,
I betrayed you, I now see the loss in your eyes,
The blisters have reached them and they sting with tears so often,
I see the helplessness and defeat in those eyes,
I pierce through with hope of the bright full moon,
I find it hidden by clouds in a morsel of hope,
The hope I know not I can fulfill,
An apology I give with a kiss sparking from my eyes,
But I know not the path to the moon,
I know not the route back to the shore,
It is seems blocked by boulders and poison Ivy,
I can only hold your gaze with a kiss of pure love.

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32 thoughts on “An Apology

  1. What a scene under the moonlight I’m seeing under this, beautiful and so heart driven passionate!

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  2. Beautiful poem 🙂

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  3. …sigh…

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  4. consider this as my apology also.Teacher if my commenting was hurting you you could have told me.why you droped that post?
    oh god,you also told nobody else can see it,anyway there was only one more thing left to
    tell you i knew my mouth only contains saliva and saliva cannot cause pregnancy,so anytype of kissing
    anywhere in any position(even on naked body of a girl),saliva would fall nothing else
    will happen.there is no way semen can’t come out of my mouth.i knew all this.but her age
    i cannot do anything if something happens.if she was atleast 18 i would have married her if baby is born.that was i was thinking abnormally and asking doctors to make sure it is all non sense and it can only be saliva.but her big belly tricked me.just
    was confused.
    the reason i said this quickly is i believe my ocd commenting will stop after this.i won’t ever come
    to your blog again.god bless.
    if you think i will comment again say anything you want to me- sherinchelad@gmail.com

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  5. sorry i meant good night for ever 😆

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  6. Hellooo
    stop thinking nonsense, pure nonsense and torturing yourself, I made it private because I wanted to, My own reasons, nothing to do with anybody else, and once more please comment relevant things, I will check your blog time to time, don’t worry I am following it right? stay calm, stay happy! 😉

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  7. hey man,
    are yaar vo incident and related things are the most relavant thing to be solved right now in my
    life 😆 but yes you are correct that things i told you pure nonsense right?you red all right so you gave this reply right?

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  8. a lady send me an award :)i still believe my comments made you to drop that topic.patha nahi kyu tum?
    i told you your poems are more easy to understand than you.see someone
    commented beautifully on your garden of hope.why no reply?
    i am still a kid when i should have had a kid right?no maturity 😆 still blogging stupid things.
    please go to youtube and hear once upon a time by yanni.it is simply nostalgic 🙂

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  9. teacher your poem is so good you know that.i can’t even write one line like that.But i thought if you are worried laughter is the best medicine,ok?

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  10. Teacher are you mentioning two persons after a broken love in your poem or a father or daughter or a mother or daughter.
    He set me in your cocoon like arms-god right?
    if atleast something i said here is right don’t delete this.i know when i can’t understand your poems you won’t mind me 😦

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  11. are yaar you are still angry.chodo akriti ko.i am sorry men and women are equal.anybody can say anything to each other ok?
    dekho yaar first time in my life i am getting a famale friend who is smart,good looking,
    good knowledge on all things.we can discuss lot of things right?
    yes rape is a serious issue.maybe our aamir khan is doing something good through his
    programme satyamev jayathe right?we will chat at night ok.please forgive me if i hurt you ok?

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  12. Adhere to the norm kais sentence he yaar meaning kya he?sticking to some rules?

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  13. i know now you won’t reply or read my blogs ever.yes i made a mistake sorry.

    dhoop nikalithi hai jaha se,
    dhoop nikalithi hai jaha se,
    dhoop nikalithi hai jaha se,
    chandni rahethi hai jaha pe,

    khabar ye aayi hai waha se
    koi tumsa nahi,oh koi tumsa nahi

    neend chupthi hai jaha pe,
    neend chupthi hai jaha pe,
    khab sajithi hai jaha pe
    khabar ye aayi ha waha se
    koi tumsa nahi oh koi tumsa nahi.

    good night. 🙂

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  14. your poem

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  15. sorry yaar delete everything i posted select your whole poem and click the b button above you see when you edit your posts ok 😆 patha nahi wordpress is detecting every html code automatically.sorry for the mess 🙂

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  16. i know what i did was unacceptable.what i was thinking is if i ask that one also i can freely post or as yhings on other sensible matters.one more thing if you have red it fully last word was :sad:.it is only a shortcut for sad faced smiley.forgive me ok?

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  17. i know what i did was unacceptable.what i was thinking is if i ask my last query on that incident i can freely post or ask things on other sensible matters.one more thing if you have red it fully last word was :sad:.it is only a shortcut for sad faced smiley.Anyway you have kept the comment Hellooo,
    stop thinking nonsense can i take that as your reply for the last big comment i posted about that incident?
    maybe time has come for me to accept the fact that an insane or mad or abnormal guy cannot make a friendship with an intelligent girl like you.but somehow even with my stupid comments i hang on till today right?anyway i have a good picture of your good things attached in my memory.that is enough for me.forgive and forget this insane guy.trust me you would become a nice wife.you won’t even say a single harsh word to your husband i am absolutely sure of that.god bless 🙂

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  18. what i meant to say was that the last word i used in my lengthy comment on the incident with that girl was the word sad inside two colon symbols which actually is a shortcut for the sad faced smiley.now
    you can smile because i think i have somehow asked all the queries to you about that sin incident.one more all obese girls anywhere in this world of her age may not have a big fat belly.to guess that fact there is no need for me to go or ask any obesity specialist or doctor right?i only have to use my common sense right?
    teacher i was going on doing wrong things for a longtime including forcefully making a friendship with you.pehli baar aisa lagraha he ki disconnecting all connections with you is gonna be the best thing i can do for you.i am not good at writing so i cannot be a good blogger but you surely can and shoould inspire others ok?.All the very best for your future.

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  19. teacher you can thrash every comments posted by me everywhere in your blog.it also is not very good looking as other comments.i will also do the same in my blog but i need little time ok?don’t know why.god bless.

    one last gift.close your eyes and listen.you can see yourself travelling somewhere may be heaven teacher.yanni is a magician.

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  20. teacher please don’t take me wrongly and just consider i did this because i couldn’t find a better song today ok?.Also i love this song very much. maybe viewing life from this angle make it more beautifull and easy to solve the mystery hidden within.
    (NB:intented only as fun you should never try this at home study hard and hear only what your parents
    say ok teacher?)
    Anyway my trying age is over and also when i had the moments i tried something else you
    better know that 😆
    teacher when i was in college there was this simple girl(she studied well not like me) with
    long hairs(with one small flower attached in center of the hairs back side)and beautifull eyes which always tried to spoke me something which i just couldn’t understand(good for her).

    Khulti Zulfon Ne Sikhayee Mausamon Ko Shayaree

    Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm
    La La La La La La

    Khulti Zulfon Ne Sikhayee Mausamon Ko Shayaree

    Jhukti Aankhon Ne Bataya Maikashi Kya Cheez Hai

    Hum Labon Se Keh Na Paaye, Unse Haal-E-Dil Kabhi

    Aur Woh Samjhe Nahin Ye Khamoshi Kya Cheez Hai

    Ishq keejiye phir samajhiye zindagi kya cheez hai?

    Ishq keejiye phir samajhiye zindagi kya cheez hai?

    good night and good bye.

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  21. Teacher i swear to god now only i noticed what i wrote on that girl and this sarfarosh movie song.it is a perfect match right?god,may be you won’t understand how surprised i am .teacher this was how i wrote good poems in my blog completely accidental.that was why i always feared to write blogs.but accidents can happen anytime again and it can bring something good out in me right?

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  22. Teacher i swear to god now only i noticed what i wrote on that girl and this sarfarosh movie song.it is a perfect match right?god i only wrote about the girl without seeing the lyrics,may be you won’t understand how surprised i am .teacher this was how i wrote good poems in my blog completely accidental.that was why i always feared to write blogs.but accidents can happen anytime again and it can bring something good out in me right?

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  23. are yaar teacher see such good incidents are happening in our friendship thodna aasan hai yaar please one chance

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  24. Beautiful poem and ode to love.

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