Eyes that see the soul

Eyes that see thy soul
Are rarely stumbled upon,
Some do so for a fleeting nano second
And the foolish soul almost bares all to those eyes
The soul pushes and digs into those eyes
A needle and a thread its allies
Sometimes those eyes pluck the thread out,
Sometimes they sew it in,
Beads slide across that thread,
Some broken and scratched,
Some jumpy and well matched,
They face a danger always,
For those eyes are of an unknown stranger,
And Mom always said don’t talk to strangers,
Beneath those lids and across the whites what if?
What if lies a monster ?
Plotting to crush the bead with its bare rough hands,
Hope never lies low,
It mumurs, could be a sweet fairy dear soul,
A sweet fairy swimming in a pool of magical shimmering nectar,
Nectar that could mend the scratches,
And broken bead dipped in it,could be wholesome again,
Those eyes if they push the beads back to the soul across the thread,
The soul then is sprinkled and awaked alive with its fragrance,
It then charms the mind,
Mind slipping the fragrance to the smile,
The beads could gourment the fairy, stay there forever,
And yet illuminating the soul with their shimmering light,
Brightening the mind,
And filling the smile with a flavour of ecstacy,
But those eyes,that see the soul,
If they pluck the thread out,
The pull stings,it stings the soul
And yet the eye slides its imprint back to the waiting soul,
Lifting it from the deep sea of misery,
Oh stranger, those eyes of yours saw the soul once,
There was a wall in front of it then,
But behind the wall opened a door,
And now a half risen wall behind the closed door,
Climbing that wall ain’t that easy,
You might see the soul..
But Will its intense stillness and nerve wrecking vibrance beneath push you away,
Destiny awaits,but oh stranger, a question and worry,
Do you still want to see the shy and yet vibrating beautiful soul?,

Categories: amibiguity, emotions, expressions, life, love, poetry, poetry on life | Tags: , , | 10 Comments

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10 thoughts on “Eyes that see the soul

  1. You certainly pierce through someone’s eyes with that gaze Pranita, seeing right into the light of one’s soul in both lights and dark, beautiful writing..as always πŸ™‚


  2. awesome and hell scary!!


  3. I haven’t seen you for sometime Pranita πŸ™‚ is everything okay?


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