Would You?

If I whispered your name

Would you trace it back to me?

Back to me amidst the melodious chirping of many voices,

Voices that tilt your attention hither-thither,

Will the music in my whisper,

And desire in its breathless tone enrapture you?


I am what you see in my eyes,

If you ever cared to look,

If you ever blinked twice as you saw me,

If my eyes talked to you,

Would you grasp the letters that they formed?

             Would you let them read to your mind a letter from a far off soul?


A soul that knows you not, yet knows your breath,

A soul that strings you not, yet follows your scent,

Would you let this simpleton’s soul touch your very magnanimous one?

Would you let me come close to see the trick of light that hides your soul, your tears?

Hide it beneath those very dark, tenaciously guarding yet honest lashes,

Eyes that tell riveting tales of thee, free soldier’s soulful musings.

Categories: life | 5 Comments

Post navigation

5 thoughts on “Would You?

  1. In your eyes I see so much, A beautiful and warm world filled with questions such as these Pranita. Beautiful, As always. Thank you for the invitation to continue reading your posts 🙂


  2. Love the picture. Great poem.


Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

Blog at WordPress.com.

The Shaded Shadows 2.0

The beginning, at the end.


by Evelina Di Lauro


The essence of writings..

Writers together

Best articles for Best readers

Travel Much?

Never cease to explore and tell!


A town everyone hates, yet no one leaves...

Sweta Ojha

A Personified Narrative : Defying Reality. Sketching Imageries.


Human !


New Perspective on Life

Fool's Blog

Various & Sundry Foolishness!

P e d r o L

storytelling the world

indahs: dive, travel & photography

cities - cultures - ocean - marine life


Turning Tears & Laughter into Words

Wind Against Current

Thoughts on kayaking, science, and life


A great WordPress.com site

Girl Meets B-School

Non-traditional MBA doin' it for herself

%d bloggers like this: